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Help me,
Hold me,
Save me from myself.
Or,
When I turn away,
Will I feel your once practiced blade,
Recently dormant,
Yet meticulously cared for,
Bite into
The old, fading scars
Spidering
Across the pale flesh of my back?
Ummm...I don't know what to think about this one. Definitely a late night poem. Written for the poetry challange under theme #38: Abandoned.
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cmball Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
I almost wish "taken care of" was "cared for" instead. thoughts?
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nngross Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist
Good catch. I do like that more. It gives it a more...ummm...loving is not the right word, but it is the only one I can come up with right now, feeling.
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Saiyakublood Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010
love it. Beautifully done.
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nngross Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Hobbyist
Thank you very much :D
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Megan-Renee Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
i love this.<3
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nngross Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Hobbyist
Why thank you :D
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Megan-Renee Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
of course [:
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